An outline of the main differences between the July 16, 1994, and the November 6, 1994, full versions of "Tragic loss or good riddance? The impending demise of traditional scholarly journals." For each section that has been altered in a substantial way, describes the changes. 1. Introduction A brief outline of the rest of the article was added at the end of this section. 2. Growth of literature The main change is the addition, at the end of the section, of more precise cost figures for libraries, including total library costs for several universities. 3. A brave new world 4. Hardware improvements 5. Software improvements 6. Electronic journals 7. Will it really be different this time? Adds a final paragraph that argues that the main part of the move away from print journals is at least 5 years away. 8. The interactive potential of the Net 8.1. Netnews 8.2. Preprint servers and directories 8.3. The publication and reviewing continuum 8.4. A possible scenario 9. The future of publishers, journals, and libraries The introduction to this section adds a quote from Ann Okerson that explains why print journals have difficulty converting to electronic formats. 9.1. Spending on new technologies Adds an example of new types of electronic publishing that will drive up spending on computers and networks. 9.2. Standards 9.3. Books and the role of paper 9.4. Costs of present system Adds more data on costs of print journals. 9.5. How much should journals cost? 9.6. Publishers 9.7. Review journals 9.8. Libraries Discusses Albert Henderson's observation that the fraction of university budgets devoted to libraries has been declining. 10. Conclusions